checc out this battle i just had

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t8fSbKXL6x0&sns=em

everybody let me know what you think

honestly............yas werent even battlin each other off the top........white dude was terrible... and yours seemed like a pre written, needed some punchlines............. but keep puttin in work... smoke good N Keep It Made ..........420

i feel ya im not really much of a battle mc just trying 2 get my music out and it was pre written just trying to show off some lyrical ability since im new to the rap scene.im working on improving in the punchline department.thanks for the feedbacc appreciate it and most definetely keeping it MADESICC.